Damp earth Mutilated id
Murky waters Forgotten vows
Pungent air Unfinished sentences
Colorless skies Broken resolves
Old bromides are new again Now that
Lines long aligned Diverge once more
6 Comments to Untitled Two
IndusDecember 8, 2009
Yes, this is just what we need in time for the holidays.
But I like. 
@JoeKr The fact that I posted this tripe clearly shows I give myself way too much credit.
@Indus Just spreading holiday cheer.
CharlDecember 9, 2009
"Unfinished sentences."
You're speaking for yourself, I'm certain.
Sometimes I wonder if my ::rolls eyes:: "chosen profession" has left me void of the ability to enjoy poetry, with all the rule breaking and syntax-chucking and stuff.
@kalafudra Thanks.
@Charl "You're speaking for yourself, I'm certain. " What are we talking about here?
It's okay to admit you don't like something. You really don't need to rationalize it.
"And you and me both know you know you write better poetry. And take better pictures. Happy now?"
Seriously, now you're just being mean.
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December 8, 2009
Tagged as "Bad Poetry"? You give yourself too little credit.